…She lay down on the floor of the house, sort of curled up
into a ball because there was nothing to hang on to. The cracks began to blossom
like spider webs beneath my feet. I jumped from one disintegrating platform to
the next, trying to move my way closer to her, to save her, and was only a few
feet away when the main support beam of the house snapped. The ceiling came
tumbling down in chunks around us. She screamed one of those blood curdling
screams, her mouth a round “O” of terror as the monsters razor-like claws move
up through the earth and snaked their way towards her. I try even more desperately
to get to her before those hideous talons do, but as their sharp shadows fall
over her, I realize I can’t save her…
Eeks! Some scary imagery here...nice details.
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